Monday, January 26, 2009

ice dancer end of chap. 3

I lay there on the cold hard concrete for a long time unable to move. I begin to close my eyes. Next thing I know I hear a strange beeping noise, Alex is standing over me saying Maddix are you ok? Can you hear me? Oh, please don’t die! She pleaded. I opened my eyes, and sit up. I am in a hospital? I say in a hushed tone.
Oh thank goodness you are ok. Alex sighed out of relief.
What happened? I asked.
Well, to tell you the truth I really don’t know. I was going to your house because I needed help with the math homework. I rang the door bell but no one came to the door. I pushed the door aside and poked my head in. I Walked in. there was no one in sight. I had decided you must have gone somewhere and that I would come back later. I was heading for the sliding door when I saw you lying on the floor. You were bleeding. There was ice and water everywhere. Also there was a strange red residue on the floor in front of you. But it wasn’t blood. I let out a scream before running inside to go find your grams, but she wasn’t there. I grabbed the phone from the counter and called nine, one, and one. They came so fast behind the ambulance. An investigator came out of the cop car and asked me what happened, and what I saw. I told them the whole story! And before I knew it you were strapped to a gurney and we were on our way to the hospital. You were not responding to anything. I even said that the Jonas Brothers were there (which they so weren’t) and nothing! We got here and they hooked you up to a lot of machines. Your heart rate flashed across one screen. Well now we are here.
I took the wires that were connected to my forehead and ripped them off. Sirens sounded and a computer generated voice came on and said This patient needs some assistance. As soon as my feet hit the floor a doctor, and a nurse rushed in. The doctor pushed passed Alex. The nurse turned to Alex and told her she had to leave now.
The doctor pushed me into the bed.
I have to go now. I screamed
You are not well enough to leave. The doctor yelled over the sirens, as she hooked me up to the machines.
I was fighting and arguing with the doctor and nurse. The door swung open and Alex stood in the doorway.
Hey! Alex yelled
The room fell silent as everyone turned to look at Alex.I think I know where your grandmother is. She said calmly.
How do you know that my grandma is missing? I said in suspicion.
Well, I never did get my answer because, I guess the doctor got frustrated And put a gas mask over my nose and mouth and it made me fall asleep.
I woke up a few hours later. Alex was still standing over me. She had stayed there for all this time.
How are you feeling? She said in a caring voice.
I sat up and rubbed my eyes.
I’m fine. I replied.
So Maddix what actually happened before I came in? Alex asked
I could never tell her that I was ice dancer and a super villain had come to my house taken my grandma and in one of her attacks I was hurt. What should I do?

Friday, January 23, 2009

ice dancer chap. 3.5

. Grams toppled over! I ran to go help her but she forced water at me pushing me back. I sat in the middle of a large puddle and yelled I was just trying to help what did you do that for? All of a sudden I knew why she had done that. Malta Lava jumped over into our backyard and grabbed grams. Grams raised water from the ground and froze it around her.
Grams ran toward me. We watched as a little red dot in the ice grew bigger and bigger until all of the ice was covered with lava then it slowly melted. Malta Lava stood in a puddle of hot lava.
And she was really mad. She spread her legs further apart held her hands toward us then forced lava at us. I stepped in front of grams (who seemed to be going through some type of shock), and froze the lava in mid air! The lava fell to the floor with a loud clank sound. It sounded like someone had dropped a million plates. I grabbed Malta lava and froze her hands together. She seemed to struggle for awhile so I froze her feet. Every time I saw a red dot I would freeze over it. I continued to do so until she was completely covered in ice.
Then the most amazing thing happened! I saw her eyes open and they were blood shot red.Finnaly the ice burst. but not just a little small crack, no it was an explosion. It was such a large explosion. It forced me back all the way to our old apple tree. I hit it, and then fell to the floor. I lay on the floor in such pain I wasn’t able to move. I saw blood pour out in front of me but it was just from my back. It was bleeding from the hit against the tree. My vision wet blurry and all I saw was that Malta lava grabbed my grams and jumped over the fence. But before she did she turned around and said something crazy!
It’s payback time Maddix.She yelled
How could she possibly know my name? I thought. How does she know where I live?
What just happened played over and over again in my mind.

Sunday, January 18, 2009

long time no blog

i am soooooooooooooo srry!!!!i will b postin stories! i was gettin into my writing and i forgot to post them can u blieve dat!!!???hopefully i will post 2moro or later 2day if i dnt jus email me at spicekitty1127@aol.com i promise that i will respond.



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Thursday, January 1, 2009

sooooo it wuz great right

how wuz mii new story did u read it????? i actually started writin dis story in 2nd grade!!! iznt dat crazy??? well i never finished it and da other day i wuz thinking bout it and jus started writing!!!now im writing 2 stories and reading one. im reading a story called cross my heart and hope to spy by ally carter sequel to i'd tell you i love you bout then i'd have to kill you!!! i read da first one in three days and it wuz over thanksgiving break. it wuz soooooooooooo gud!!! well i have to go and continue to do wat i do best read and write so bii!!!!!



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