either way here are my notes soo far...
Protagonist: Zela Jackson, and Phil Flannigan
Antagonist: Eugene Anderson
the rest of these notes probably wont make sense but bare with me anyway:
- begins with Argument with Anderson (yes everyone calls him anderson because he doesnt like the name Eugene) the argument nearly tears their relationship apart {eugene-Zela= :( }
- Relationship already had problems no one approved because anderson is older and they are always arguing about something...
- introduction of Phil. having his own relationship problems...Phil and Zela meet at a wild party and he nearly saves her life...but it was too dark for her to get a good look at his face...and he left too quickly for her to catch his name.
- Zela is taken by this mysterious guy doodling a masked hero all over her notebooks swooping in and saving her.
- Phil and Zela talk in class but she doesn't realize it was him...they become close and Anderson gets jealous..
- Anderson threatens Phil without Zela knowing.but she does not believe phil when he tells her.
- Zelas cousin (name to be decided) is highly involved with her relationship with Eugene she actually got them together...when she senses the relationship falling apart she blames phil causing a huge argument]
- THE MOMENT... zela is going to class and inside she sees phil and how he looks sickly and depressed and it drains her soul.
- she decides to ask about it later...and thats when he explains his break up. she feels horrible but apart of her saw it comming...she gave him advice although she knew inside she sort of liked him...
- on the phone she explains to him how someone mysterious saved her at a party and he realizes it was him. but he doesnot tell her. she goes on to explain that he will never know who could just swoop in and save him from his heartache and it would be the most unsuspecting person.
- Mood switch: Zela...hunny ...i think she is waking up....can you hear me Zela please.
- Anderson comes to her house late one night asking Zela if she still loves him. she replies like a friend but right now this is too complicated for me. he pulls out a knife and stabs her screaming if you cant love me you cannot love anyone else.
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- Zela dies and at her funeral journal entries are read explaining how she has a strange feeling about what Anderson might do and strange farewell notes to her friends and family and the mysterious guy from the party who will always own her heart.
- Phil attends the service visibly shaken...he asks to say a few words and he goes up and reads a note she had given him....you can tell he fights off tears before he begins singing.... ill be your hero-sterling knight. he reveals that he is the mystery hero and everyone is visibly sadden at the thought because she never got to tell him she loved him
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Alternate ending:
- Zela is in critical condition after Anderson attacks her...he gets away.
- in her hospital room many people come in and out visiting her...she was legally dead for 3 minutes and is in and out of a coma.
- Phil comes to visit her and she tries her hardest to open her eyes once she hears his voice.she wants to tell him everything tell her she is ok...but just then he explains to her he is the mysterious hero ....although she is in a comma at the time her still lifeless body produces a tear and he leaves wondering if she heard him....
- Zela'scondition stablizes and she is able to go home...parts of her memory missing still...susposedly to return according to doctors...until then she jst reads her diary and letting old memories flow back to her.
- She remember faintly a boy comming to her telling her he is the mystery hero. but she has no clue if it was a dream or not. just in the midst of wondering she hears music out her window....
- she looks out to find Phil standing there holding up a boom box playing ill be your hero- Sterling knight...
- she realizes it was not a dream and runs down to him...
- Anderson was never convicted guilty because a week later he is found dead in his car with a note saying now she can never love me so i can not live.
- Phil and Zela live happily ever after...or some corny ending like that...
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symbols:
magnets Zela and phil
journal
fortune cookies...
maskquerade ball* subject to change
I know it sounds kind of sad and depressing but trust me once i add the little details in i promise it wont be sooo sad...it will be the cutest love story ever....soo guys which ending do you like better??
this whole storyline is subject to change....because it was written differently before and i might want to make it more cutesy for all the true love saps who would be angry other wise....thanks for reading
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